Dissapear.

Hell I wish I could dissapear

hell I wanna leave

I can't handle the pain

the pain is taking over me

eating me up from within.

 

 

You reaches for my hand

I'm slipping

I can't take yours

as mine.

 

 

Soon I'm gone

soon its too late

I wanna slip away

wanna leave everything behind.

 

 

This pain is way too much

way too much for me to handle

to get through

to find faith

 the faith in life.

 

 

Hell I wish I'd never looked

hell I wanna leave

I need an angel from above

an angel who'll stay by my side

an angel who'll be screaming my name.

 

 

The light is far away

I can't seem to find it

find the eternal light

the eternal light of mine.

 

 

My faith

my pride

my love

is gone

soon, very soon then I'll be gone as well.

 

The shadows long and dark

seems so follow me everywhere I go

everywhere I wanna be

the shadows is caused by the dark creatures

creatures of sadness

creatures of loneliness.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[Arabdha]

"I wanna slip away
wanna leave everything behind." says it all..life can be a lot of effort at times..and i hope you get your 'angel' soon :)

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This poem is profoundly one of your best! i love how you express yourself... Your grammer is really not an issue and I think your little grammer issues give your poem much more character. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite reads, and A pleasure to know such a talented poetess... Thank you so much for sharing

[Apathy To Empathy]

The shadows long and dark
seems so follow me everywhere I go
everywhere I wanna be
the shadows is caused by the dark creatures
creatures of sadness
creatures of loneliness.

My favorite stanza. This poem i can really relate to...

[Theodore]

I can relate to this one tough tough tough times for me hope this is not a reflection your life.

keep the good writing up.

[kyrie]

Those creature.... How the hell do they seem to be able to torture everybody? It is good to be able to write of the clarity with which we see our own ends, and it is best to accept it, as long as we know that we can change it.