I'm Alone.

I'm alone
All alone in this world so cold
In a world so cold where no one likes me
No one cares.

These pieces
Those pieces of my heart
Is scattered all around the floor
All around in my body
Who can ever put them together?

 

As I smashed a mirror
The reflective pieces showed an another side of me
A weak side
A side no one ever should see
No one ever should feel

 

Someone brainwashed me
Someone wants to control me
Hell I won't let them
My heart is shattered enough in the first place.

 

 

Someone mean time heals our wounds
Yes so do I
But I know
those wounds
Haunts me
The experiences haunts me as well
I have nothing to say.
I dont know what to say.

 

My mind is shattered
My heart is scattered all around
No one cares enough
Enough to make me stand
Help me back up
Help me to get through this f*****g time.

All I need is time
Yet it destroys me
Destroys every little piece of me
Every lovely memory I have.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Lots of pain and suffering from one so young.
Great imagery that coincides with this piece.
well done ....

[Arabdha]

your poetry reminds me of the pain and despair we all have felt at some point of time..beautifully phrased..:)

[FallenHeroXx]

Awesome :P

Fallen

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

your depth in this piece leaves one experiencing the internal anguish of heartbreak I love how you put it: Those pieces of my heart
Is scattered all around the floor
All around in my body
Who can ever put them together?
This made the poem, for without this brilliant phrasing, it would have no depth... I truly felt the pain you wished me to share, and I really enjoyed this work... Marvellous

[hannajade]

i loved this poem, the thrid stanza was great!
and also the two lines that were like,
I have nothing to say.
I don't know what to say.

those were brilliant!! 100/100 for sure!

[kyrie]

Time does build and destroy. This is the quiet, restless despair that lets us be "normal".....but they never stop haunting. Great job.

[Apathy To Empathy]

No matter what you write, it inspires me! Gosh, you're that good! Keep up the good work!