Stand In The Rain.

Read the title.

I'm standing in the cold

now I know

no one likes me at all

I have to accept it.

 

 

Hell you want me dead

yes you want me to die

I wont die

my stubbornness makes me stand

stand even stronger

stand through the pain

then I wont drown.

 

 

The rain is falling

my tears are running

my bloodshot eyes long for sleep

I held the pieces of me in my hands

seeing how much damage you caused me

Damn I wish I could get rid of my mental pain.

 

 

Yet someone tells me they're here with me

I can't believe them

too many lies and broken promises

they look like shattered glass

Hell I hate my problems

not all of them is mine

yet they affects me in any possible way

in any way somebody could hurt me

 

 

The sky is falling down

no one can help me

I'm all alone in this

I'll stand strong

stand through the pain

 when everything's crashing down

I wont drown in those tears I cry

 

I wont make a sound

yet the sky is falling down

I want to give it all up

and lie down

yet a voice in my head says

"Stand up, if you don't you'll drown"

I'll stand in the rain.

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[Kelley]

I liked it and you could feel your strength being zapped
as you read a long.

[kyrie]

How many times I have been exhausted by senseless fights I cannot count. How many times I have hushed and fought my urges to scream and shout and die, I cannot say. What I know is this: I must fight. It doesn't matter how broken I am, how uch it hurts, how much they've taken and stolen from me. The one thought that comes above all others, despite the need to give in to eternal sleep, is that I must stand. Thank you for writing this, and know that there are others. Others who are standing despite the hell. We will overcome.

[Apathy To Empathy]

ALone am I
I want to die
ANd all this feeling you possess
I want you to know: I express
In my heart it dwells
God you write so good like hell
A burning passion in your writing
This peice is so inspiring...

It is a sad writing, but as always, I AM RIGHT THERE WITH YOU! I know that might peeve you, and you don't have to believe me...But I love your writing!....

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Before I review the pice I want to say this: at the end on your author's notes you say Ignore grammer problems. Thats easy to do, when I dont see any. A poetic expression isn't about grammar or spelling, It about letting the reader feel you, to touch your soul in a personal way, and to release the innerstruggles, or the heartfelt emotions contained within, Like the other poems I have read today you have accomplished that divinely! You have expressed the innermost thoughts of your soul, and have allowed us to travearse the dark hallowed road of anguish you walk upon... I have felt this way several times, and this is an excellent piece!

[Theodore]

a lot of pain in this one keep up the good writing.

[Jim Parson]

This is terrific, particularly the final stanza. I love the visual of it as well. Well done!

[FallenHeroXx]

Awesome :P

Fallen

[Arabdha]

you are exhausted and yet you don't wanna give up..you stand even when the rain is pouring down..commendable..both the effort and the poetry,,!!