Shattered.

Our fights

our laughs

is shattered into a thousand f*****g pieces

I believe time heals our wounds

you tells me everything is

gonna be just fine.

 

This is the last night I'll feel like this

you're not a scar worth

stop complaining

just shut the f**k up

and leave me bleeding

 leave me dying.

 

 

Yes you left me in the side of a lonely road

hell I was lonesome

so lonesome I could cry

you f*****g made me cry

over and over

forget everything about me

your promises f*****g looks like glass.

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write...everybody bleeds, but wounds heal in time...that is a good saying for this piece too...that was one of my signatures...and I really loved that I worded it that way...because I read a story...and the title was Everyone Bleeds, but In Time the Wounds Heal...but that is where my signature comes from...good job and liked the emotion and imagery. Thanks for sharing.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is a great expressive piece... Shattered, bleeding, torn. The sufferings of lost love and internal anguish is profound and its depth flow as a constant through out the entire piece... A good poet will make one walk through their soul, and will make you experience their emotions. You have done that amazingly, so much so, I am going to need a tissue. Great read!

[FallenHeroXx]

Awesome poetry...
Really good.
I like it..


Fallen

[Chelsea]

This is so great! Once again, I will say, you have mastered depressing/angry writes!!
I always feel your emotions in your poem, truly you are talented!
I like this, promises like glass. Maybe instead of glass, shattered glass??? Just to emphasize the broken promise!
I like it as is, but just an idea! Great write!!