The Time Is Ticking.

Yep, the title says it all.

It feels like your life is in my hands

Am I your angel in the darkness?

I’ll fight for you untill the end

Even if it seems like it’s over

Like everything is crashing down

Like the world is going under

 

I disappointed you

In any way

In any possible way

I’m so sorry.

 

You’re a sun

I’m a snowflake

Your shine melts me

I’m slowly fading away

You’ll keep on shining

I’ll keep on melting

 

Please don’t leave

I know I always end up hurting you

It wasn’t my intention

I hate to hurt you

 

The wind blows as I keep on falling

The sun keeps on shining

Somehow the light makes the snowflake

Feel alive

Free

And precious.

 

I’m walking around in the wood

The trees is black

The leafs is on the ground

I hear howlings from the wolfs

The moon is full

It’s completly dark

I can’t see a thing

Yet I can hear our heartbeat

Pounding like they were as one

Yet my heartbeat slows down

As yours goes faster

I’m falling

You’ll get back up

Back up on your feet

I’ll keep on falling

Down on my knees

It makes me taste the dirt

Yes the f*****g dirt

Here I am

Broken and in such a deep sorrow

Laying on the dirty ground in those f*****g gramps of pain

The cramps is taking over

The cramps f*****g hurts

 

I can hear nothing but my own heartbeat

It slows down for every second

Every second it keeps slowing down

 

The wind stopped blowing

The animals stopped walking

My heartbeat was the only thing I could hear

Where were you?

Did you just leave?

The wolfs keeps on howling at the moon

I was searching for you

My footsteps gets louder and louder as I walk through the dirt

My eyes is used to the darkness

I can see clear

My heart is slowing down

The time is ticking.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Man this poem is so passionate, and sorrowful at the same time... My heart goes out to the protagonist of the poem.. So longing forthat special love, yet never seeming to do anything right. I have been there many times and relate well to it.
It has a bittersweet quality that reaches beyond the poem and it is very well expressed, The flow and rhythm are terrific, and this was an enjoyable read... I also loved these lines.. They really affected me, more after I read the poem, which make it more passionate,You’re a sun
I’m a snowflake
Your shine melts me
I’m slowly fading away
You’ll keep on shining
I’ll keep on melting

Thank you for letting me read this remarkable piece, it is going in my favorites

[Labtoad]

this broke my heart...very well written and the sorrow was definitely conveyed. A beautiful piece.

[Jim Parson]

This is so real I could smell the earth beneath my feet as I walked through it. As always, you write with incredible emotion.

[FallenHeroXx]

Nicely written.
I liked the imagery you sent.
I loved this poem.
One of your best pieces in my opinion..

~A Fallen Hero~

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a very nice write...I liked the imagery within the piece. I could see the sun melting a snowflake...and I could see dark dead leaves...I liked the poem. It's true time is ticking...it always will be. Thanks for sharing...

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This could be a song. :]
I like it.