I lost you.

Read the title.

I lost you

you wouldn't listen

listen to what I said

now you're gone

how should I feel?

 

I'm dead inside

I'm lost

I'm in such a deep sorrow

yes I feel so damn hollow.

 

You knew how much damage you would cause me

you knew how much you meant to me

you knew I would be there for you

you took it for granted.

 

I keep on telling you to stop

you kept on saying you wanted to end it now and here.

he was like a wall.

 

I hope you'll get to see this

you mean a lot to me

you're my best friend

I wont lose you.

 

Palle Pallesen AKA A Fallen hero

stay by my side

I'll stand by yours

I'll help you through.

Let me help you

I want to.

 

The monsters are watching me

waiting for the right second

to attack me

to kill me

to drain me

drain me for love

drain me for my engergy of living

they're looking through my window

I can't see them

yet I can feel their cold strong hands

tightning their grib around my throat

They lie here underneith my bed

waiting for the perfect second to take away

 everything there's valuable to me.

 

Written by: A Fallen Heroine

Date: 22nd of January.
Dedication: A Fallen Hero.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.
Honest Oppinion please.

Reviews

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Wow, I am saddened by your loss. You have truly expressed it so deeply and passionately that I really cant express myself on this... You are extremely talented, and my heart goes out to you!

[Chelsea]

This was pretty sad. I know this feeling though! Just that your dieing on this inside and stuff. I don't really know how to put it. But I understand you!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this was a really sad write...Good job on this...I liked the imagery...Thanks for sharing...

[Beth Wilcox]

This is so inspiring. This was amazing, I don't even know what to exactly say I'm so speechless. I could really feel the emotion through this and I could def relate to it, keep it up. Very well done girl.

[FallenHeroXx]

Now i could make a long a*s lecture 'bout wanting to stay and all.. But i won't... Hell... I just don't feel like it.. Just leave it there please.. Don't start this now please... I've been seeing her all day with that dickhead... Damn, I fucked up...
Just not today... Not tomorrow just leave it right there.... Just leave me bleeding in the side of a road... Please... I beg of you... Don't start now... I'll never leave i promised ya didn't i... Just trust me on this one please... I just need peace and time and i'll be okay...


~A Fallen Hero~

[Apathy To Empathy]

I don't know what to say...THe emotion is so deep that it touches me in an icy way