What Can I Say?

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I wish I'd spent more time with you

I wish I'd never made you cry

I wish I'd never left you

 

I keep on hurting you

I keep on leaving you

I keep on regret what I've done

 

Promise me you'll remember me

not for the bad times

but by the good ones

I know I've done just one good thing

I know I've done a shitload of bad ones as well.

 

I'll keep on helping you

I'll keep on saving you

I'll keep on tell you how much you mean to me

 

I wish I'd helped you through
I wish I'd never teared you apart

I wish I'd never made you choose

 

What's wrong with me

Have I done anything bad today?

All you say is leave me alone

Tell me it's okay.

 

Can you help me?

All I see is darkness

No one is as good for me as you

 

I miss you

 

Save me from the darkness

All I see is you

Yes you're all I see.

Author's Note

A Fallen Hero: Thanks for the idea.
Sarah: Thanks for being there for me.
A Fallen Heroine: Thanks for keep on writing.

Reviews

wow, that was amazing. i loved the emotions nd the words. i completly undstand the feelings you poured into it. just amazing.

[FallenHeroXx]

Great poetry.
Love the feel of it..

Fallen

[Apathy To Empathy]

I really enjoyed this. I could feel the deep emotions within! Thank you for posting!

[Megan]

I really like this. It's a little repetitive, and you could probably fix up some of the verbs, but other than that it's good! I like the message you're sending out, and the feeling that's behind it. You can tell it's real. Good job!