I can't believe.

Written 17th of January..

I can't believe

I think I'm

losing you

You're all I need

I need you to get by

to get over

to move on.

 

 

Yet you're so cold

yes so cold

it makes me freeze

just one touch and

my world is frozen.

 

 

Because of you my mind is racing

yet you don't care

no you don't care

your touch

your coldness

makes me sick

makes me wanna scream

scream of you

scream at those old day

where you wasn't that cold to me.

 

yet you mean the world to me

though your reactions

makes me annoyed

though I still care about you

 

 

your coldness makes me sad

angry

and most of all disappointed

 

this is tearing me apart

ripping up my scars

I've hidden

scars I'd try to protect

from everyone and everything

 

 

Yes you mean the world to me

You're what I'm breathing for.

Yet I have to hide

I don't want to lose you.

 

Written by: A Fallen heroine.

Date: 17th of January

Time: 1:36 pm

Dedication: Sarah.

Author's Note

Honest Oppinion please.

Reviews

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This poem was very symbolic and expressive. The rhythm flowed perfectly and the tempo superb. You are an incredibly awsome poet with a raw natural talent You presentations of your piece flows freely and it an enjoyable write...

[Cynthia]

oh, that just hits me through my heart! Thats very touching to my heart, I swear thats a honest comment, no one is going to lie to you. I understand, dont want to loose someone, and that one just dont understand you, thats hurt!

[FallenHeroXx]

I like this piece a s**t ton :D

Fallen