What am I supposed to do?

Tell me.

Should I ?
Shouldn't I ?

I  know it's wrong

hell it's wrong

Why do I even

think this way?

 

My mind is racing

How can I stop it?

How can I stop thinking about it?
You placed it in my mind.

 

Do I want to

risk everything?

I still love you

hell I'm confussed.

 

It's up to me

who of them do I want to hurt?

NONE!!
I f*****g hate

to hurt people

yet I'm stuck

In this case I have no choice...

Author's Note

Honest oppinion please.

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Good poem, jeg elsker denne (did I wrote it right?), though, as an opinion, I think you should add more feeling when writing about this kind of things, I know sometimes it might be difficult for us, the ones who doesn't speak english as a mother language, but overall it's still a very good poem.
Great writing. :)

[Chelsea]

Nice work :) You've written a captviating piece and left me wondering.
I might make a few suggestions. The message and such are great in this poem! Just the words, they're ones of anger not so poetic. So maybe for fun just mix it up! Throw in some big words for fun, see how you like it!
When I read it, it had this broken feel to it. But it really suits this poem, the pain, anger, etc. It totally works!
I love it, you write dark work well!

[FallenHeroXx]

It shows a great battle between your feelings for two people. I believe i know whom you are talking about. Great poetry. Keep up the awesome work my friend :)

Fallen