Will my heart survive?

The title says it all.

Flames are burning down my happiness

Flames in my heart

Rips up my scars

Makes every little mistake of mine visible

Every little fear I had is brought to life

Every little sadness is about to break out

Every scar in my heart

Can be touched by the flames

Easily to rip up
I’m easy to break into pieces

One wrong word

Is enough to break me down

Just one misunderstanding

Is enough to make me cry

One wrong thought is enough

To ruin a whole day

Yet one sight of my love

Is enough to make me happy

A true friend fights against the flames

Inside of me

My friend fights against the flames

Flames there’s ripping me apart

Breaking me into pieces

Will my heart survive?

Author's Note

Honest oppinion please.

Reviews

[FallenHeroXx]

Great poem :) i like the style keep up the good work

Fallen

[Evershine]

Lovely, your heart shall survive; fire may burn you but those who are true can survive all the fire in the world, it makes you stronger. Beautiful description you used, sewing this poem together. Write on...
Evershine