In The Tears We Have Cried.

It's clear to me

This is all over

Never going back

To the place you left me.

 

 

It's been 6 months today

How did we get this far?

It hurts

Now that we're so far away.

 

 

We once swore

Never to leave each others side

Our memories may have vanished

In the tears we have cried.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion~

Reviews

[felica mariiee]

The strong raw emotion in this has a depressing beauty to it over all phenomenal

[no sun]

Honest opinion...you are asking a lot from me :) j/k It is simple and raw and drowns the reader in real emotions. That is what makes a poem poetry. Beautifully done!

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. Funny how when we look back. How things were and we remember promises made and broken. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[CherryBomb]

So nice, and personally relatable! Nice write

[stars are far]

that was so great :D

[Justin Flume]

This is good. Really f*****g good (:

[A Risen Heroine.]

Thank you, thank you. (:

[quinfinn]

ummm....been there myself but the worst part is that feeling of being betrayed
the pain seems unbearable but writing helps...you have poured it out in words very
nicely here...solid write!

[Secret Lullaby]

This poem really hits home:( My bf and I just broke up after 6 months:( Love the poem! Great Work!!

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Nostaligic, deep, and I don't know how to express the connection. Beautifully you placed your words, and the emotions are understandable. A wonderful write, even if angst shows through!

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Sad. I like how you ended it. The last two lines "Our memories may have vanished,
In the tears we have cried" are great and very powerful.