What do you want?

If you want my help,
Shout to the stars, for
No earthly body
Will be there
To assist

If you want to talk to me,
Whisper to the river, because
Particles
Of my soul
Will be flowing through

If you want to see me,
Look to the trees, for
My heart resides
Among those green
Pinnacles of life

If you want my presence
You need only look to your flames
To see me dancing
Through the fiery pit
To which I have retired

Reviews

[Miso May]

Love, love, love it. You may need to look into the way you structure your poems, as it seems a bit clunky. Look into ways to make your words flow more easily.

[Jas]

Thank you! I'll definitely look at that:)