The Hearts Retreat

I tried calling out his name, Again,

In the midst of despair.

But the Heart seems to have drawn a veil,

Through which my pleads cannot penetrate.

To witness the season of everyone's departure, 

Even included my heart which needed to be spared.

Enough have I have disturbed him,

In the dark nights and mornings crave.

Now I watch him resting by the window,

Sleeping in the cradles of these gentle breeze.

Reminding me to slumber too,

Surrendering the urge to wake him up again...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words and thoughts.
"But the Heart seems to have drawn a veil,
Through which my pleads cannot penetrate."
I liked the above lines. You took the reader with you and you made the reader think. Nice flow of thoughts led to hones ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Adil]

Thank you so much for ur reviews..made my day..:)

[Adil]

https://dilsaysitout.wordpress.com/2017/01/06/blog-post-title-4/

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad and you are welcome.

[Adil]

Plz feel free to visit my above blog..have started writing today..it will be a collection of short stories about everyday experience with a reflective tone..will be adding more in coming days..

[Coyote Poetry]

I tried. johncoyotejohncoyote.wordpress.com
The above is my wordpress. Try to connect with my site.

[Adil]

Have checked urs too...great work...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you.

[Surya]

Way you choose your words, flow you drive through are pretty good.
Thank you Adil for sharing a beautiful write.

[Adil]

Thank you so much Surya for your helpful words...:)

[Aishwarya Prem]

You are an amazing writer...this poem has got its flow and its very picturesque..loved it

[Adil]

Thanks a ton Aishwarya...Yours words are really encouraging...

[Aishwarya Prem]

Keep writing :)

[Isabella Ivy]

The phrase, 'surrendering the urge' is a thought provoker. We humans could benefit from learning to do this. Thank you for allowing me to read. Your poem is filled with a sweetness most desire. I.I.

[Adil]

Thanks a lot Isabella...and yes you are correct, we humans should practice the art of letting go after having tried in the best possible way for a cause..!!

[APOORVA]

this is my favorite one yet on this plateform

[Adil]

Thank you sooo much..It meant a lot...:) :)

[The dark story]

"Sleeping in the cradles of these gentle breeze.

Reminding me to slumber too,"

I loved these lines. Welcome here. Would be a great pleasure to read your works. Thanks for sharing.

[Adil]

Thanks a ton for your helpful review..it helps a lot..:) Have just begun writing a post...plz check it out if possible..need some constructive advices to continue my writing further...

https://dilsaysitout.wordpress.com/2017/01/06/blog-post-title-4/

[The dark story]

It's a pleasure :) will check that for sure. Have a happy weekend.

[Adil]

Thanks..:)