The taming of the beast

You will see it as you read along :)

The world fades, we are alone
Heavy breathing, hearts beseeching
My soul is now your hostage
Boundless in this Utopia
I taste your ecstacy in your beads of sweat
Our spirits mesh as I hold my breath
I am yours, you are my mine
A King and his Queen
In this kingdom divine

I knew you before
Not now
Not never
In a past life I'm sure
Like snakes we slither
Wrapped around each other
If only they knew so they could yearn for a taste
A taste of this forbidden fruit
We are wrong but it feels right
Oh how long I have waited

I hear my voice
Slowly trying to escape from my throat
But its afraid, confronted by this earthquake
Like a savage beast it comes
Ripping the sweet nectar from my flower
A bolt of electricity
A shockwave that pulls the life from me
Bit by bit, drip by drip
I empty

My nerves on fire
My beast sated
We are one
The world becomes clear
I can feel us, dehydrated
My thirst is being unquenched
Ever so quickly
I yearn for more
Take me back
I am waiting

Author's Note

I wanted to write something strictly sensual that places emphasis on solely pleasing ones body and mind. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[swathi]

i guess u hv put ur heart n soul into writing this poem. its just amazin

[A.D Edwards]

Thank you friend, and yes I always do

[swathi]

i dont really put in effort to writing anything. so.........we are totally different people

[A.D Edwards]

But writing is expressing your thoughts and emotions, it should just flow naturally

[swathi]

to be frank wit u, i kinda feel this......but only sometimes. Do u think it would have been possible to write these without me thinking about these things

[Lola_Bee]

ah the hotter side of poetry, very sensual and very provocative yet classy. definitely moves every inch of ones imagination

[A.D Edwards]

Thank you Lola! For some reason I find that writing this genre is so much better when given from a females point of view

[Lola_Bee]

I know what you mean, it could come off harsher from a males perspective but you unraveled the scene very well and sensual.

[A.D Edwards]

Thank you! Your words inspire me :)

[Lola_Bee]

so I've been thinking of giving this genre a shot, im not good at it but it was a try.

[A.D Edwards]

I'll be pleased to check it out