I thought it was spiritual and truthful…and a positive, sincere way to live…
One critique, Abdul….next to last line is difficult to interpret…perhaps would read better "I am only a "part" or I only share
my Master's Majesty (definitely need apostrophe with Master)
just a suggestion…
Nicely done though,
allen
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10 Years Ago
Thank you allen for your feed back and thanks for the suggestion I appreciate it
very spiritual..pity is is written for a false god of a false religion.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for your feedback of course I could have done without the False comments but we all have o.. read moreThank you for your feedback of course I could have done without the False comments but we all have our opinions thank you for sharing yours.
I thought it was spiritual and truthful…and a positive, sincere way to live…
One critique, Abdul….next to last line is difficult to interpret…perhaps would read better "I am only a "part" or I only share
my Master's Majesty (definitely need apostrophe with Master)
just a suggestion…
Nicely done though,
allen
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you allen for your feed back and thanks for the suggestion I appreciate it
It is said that if Johnny Thunders and Janis Joplin were to have a child then have him to be raised by the unwanted aspects of Society while having him schooled in Timbuktu that person would be me.
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