Three Dollar

Three Dollar

A Chapter by Abdul Batin Osman Bey
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being overwhelmed

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I feel as if I’m drowning

Deep into the ocean of life

Struggling to survive

Yet never reaching the surface

Taking a mouthful of bitter salt

Eyes glazing over

As the shimmering light disappears

 

O how I wish I could make it

To the surface one more time

It would ease my aching mind

Slowly becoming nothing



© 2013 Abdul Batin Osman Bey


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It's an excellent metaphorical poem. We seem to have the same style of writing, for the most part.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Abdul Batin Osman Bey

11 Years Ago

Thank you I'll check your work out.

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 Added on July 15, 2013
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Abdul Batin Osman Bey
Abdul Batin Osman Bey

Cambridge, MA



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