Black Moon Morning

Punk style lyrics about disappointed love

Black Moon creeping no one cares

Don’t tell your mother

The children listen without ears

Fear of being discovered

Feeling weighed down by tears

Another way to discover

 

Love isn’t suppose to be like this

A thorn prickled kiss

If all you feel is unhappiness

Just come down and bleed me

 

Naked lady in a thistle field

Go behind the curtain

Remedy for the cure

Moon departed station

Mastery is another form of slavery

Only the morning will tell

 

Love isn’t suppose to be like this

A thorn prickled kiss

If all you feel is unhappiness

Just come down and bleed me

 

Bleed me- all you got to do

Bleed me- no denying

Bleed me- all you got to do

Bleed me- all you got to do

 

Love isn’t suppose to be like this

A thorn prickled kiss

If all you feel is unhappiness

Just come down and bleed me

 

Author's Note

hope you enjoy

Reviews

[Writer #00]

BEAUTIFUL~!! It sounds like it would be a great spoken word (you should record it and post it on your profile or something...just a suggestion, of course). Hope you feel better (if this is inspired by personal events...if not, good job in conveying very realistic emotions). Outstandingout!


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Wait a bit... is that Alice?!

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

that sounds cool actually maybe I will I had an idea to make it like a gothic song something like the Cure but maybe I will post it as a spoken word. I'll let you know if I do, I always like suggestions you never know where the path leads until you follow it.
Yes That is Alice with tats, you like.

[Writer #00]

Gothic song sounds great too, the poem just seems like something that should be heard...if that makes sense.
I'm not sure how I feel about Alice, to be honest...

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

I thought Alice was cute, I've been leaning towards the spoken word since the song would be just me on acoustic guitar or Ukulele

[Writer #00]

Acoustic guitar + (a good) voice is always pleasing to the ear. I suppose you could do both... no one says you have to choose between the two. : )

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

That is true I could do both, as far as my voice I sound a little like Joe Strummer meets Tom Waits when I post it I'll let you know. I have some stuff on youtube if you want to look me up.

[Writer #00]

Is your channel name the same as your WC name?

[Writer #00]

I just searched it. Apparently it is. Cupcakes don't kill people.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Oh yea but of course if you eat too many cupcakes they just might cause a heart attack so they can in a round about way kill you, depends how we look at it but I just liked the T-Shirt.

[Writer #00]

Yep. : )