S Dot

about people who think life is about clutter and not about enjoying the simplicity of each moment

Rush around

Blind fools

Scatter your brain with bills and work

Lose yourself until you are a machine

Pushing your own self into a tiny hole

 

No more painters

No more musicians

No more free thinkers

 

The beauty of the world is lost

Lost to this generation

So many have never stopped

Never saw a sunrise

Never felt the moon lit kiss

Never knew themselves

 

Rush around

Rush around

Scatter your brains

You fools among angels

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy let me know what you think

Reviews

[soady]

I like this poem and the point that it has. As for the grammar, it lacks interpunction. I don't know if it is okay to recommend my own songs in a review, but I really think you would enjoy my song "The Big Black Hole" which talks about the same subject as your song. Nice job!

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Thank you for your honest review and I would like to hear your song if you have it up on-line send me a link

[soady]

I wrote the song "Big Black Hole" with certain rhythm in my head but I can't sing and I never recorded the song. You can read it here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/soady/1030499/
Thanks!

[kublakhan27]

Definitely words to live by...nice job.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

thank you very much

[MOON]

Lyrical write mall rats with going no where fast.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

exactly :-)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

"Never saw a sunrise
Never felt the moon lit kiss"

So much is materialism these days, ppl think money equates to happiness...
but worlds natural beauties....they can't own, they for all of God's creations to enjoy and admire :)