Enemy Prayer

Something I felt compelled to write recently

Do not crush my enemies O Lord

Bless them

Lift them up

Give them mercy

They are deaf, dumb and blind

They are caught in an illusion knowing no reality

Beam your light into there hears

Expand their minds so they may gain wisdom

Only then will they turn from their wicked ways

Only then will they prostrate before you, your face

Praising you

Repenting before you

Truly you are a Being of ever flowing mercy

Amen.

Reviews

[TLK]

I really like this. Only one thing I would change, which is just a basic grammar quibble - "there hears" should be "their ears".

This makes me think of the phrase "kill them with kindness". It also makes me think of the many times I've heard these sentiments, from people of all religions and none, that makes me wish we did deal with hatred and ignorance by honestly wishing love and education on each other.

It also makes me think of Mormonism, as I have heard that one part of their belief system is that, when a non-Mormon dies, they exist in a kind of purgatory where an angel brings them to appreciate the truth of the religion and, upon believing it honestly, you are allowed into heaven. I'm not sure if this is actually true, as I can't find any evidence for this belief after a quick web-search. However, the idea is essentially taking the sentiments of your poem but making them a standard part of the after-life.

Overall, this is a poem that has something to say about a really important idea, regardless of religion or background, that has exercised human consideration for some time. I think that makes it notable.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Great review

[Extant]

This reminds me of exactly what is on my profile: Mi amigos, mi enemigos, te amo. My friends, my enemies, I love you. Hate solves nothing, cruelty only erodes progression, we can try to influence others towards right and cure wrong, but it is always a personal decision to what is just. Whether it is in the eyes of a deity, or in a friend, an enemy, nothing is as sweet as saving a soul.