Spirit and Flesh

inspired by the Noble Order of Moorish Sufis

While the Christ ascended to heaven

Taking his seat next to the Father

Allowing the thief into Paradise

The human Jesus cried out: Why have you forsaking me?

Feeling only mortality

Empty

The black clouds rolled above his head

The man died

Earthquake

Rendering the cloth in the Holy Temple

Fulfilling the Torah

Pushing the universe forward

 

On the third day

Early morning

Christ united himself again with the human

God among us

Man saved us

Jesus awoke

Leaving the Tomb

Preaching the final touches of the Gospel

 

Christ in Jesus

God in Man

Ascended into Eternal Glory

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think

Reviews

[stardust X]

It's truly beautiful! I like the way you have used the short verses, they give a lot of strength to the poem :)

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Thank u

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A truly lovely and unique write, so much knowledge, yet
applied with skill :)

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Thank u

[kublakhan27]

Very nicely and eloquently told :)

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Thank u very much

[kublakhan27]

No problem^^