STARS

This is poem on stars. The poet recollects how he used to enjoy the sight of the stars in his childhood. After years went by he will be busy in worldy life so much that he forgets the joy he used get

STARS

A Poem by Abdul Wahab Khanapur

 

Stars are twinkling very bright

What pleasure it fill to our sight

Do not know where they vanish in the day

Look for them in the sky or in the hay.

 

Uncountable they are in the Milky way

Guiding sailors to their way

They fill pleasure to the eye

All the memories they untie.

 

As a child I looked at them

Wanted to play and poke at them

But now hardly get a time

Busy in a world which has its own rhyme.

 

Want to run away from the wearies of this world

Go back to the stars and remain in their fold.

 

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I love admiring stars too. Very well written.

[ABDUL WAHAB]

Thank you for your encouraging words.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Orphic dreamer]

"Uncountable they are in the Milky way
Guiding sailors to their way"

this line punches quite well with the overall flow of the poem. absolutely brilliant! you have painted a beautiful image with your rhythmic words

[ABDUL WAHAB]

Thank you smol boi for your review

[Melinda McQueen]

What a great write. Stars made by the greatest God.

[ABDUL WAHAB]

Thank you Melinda for reviewing my poem and leaving a comment.

[Beccy]

No matter we grow from childhood to adulthood. We should never tire of star gazing.

The vastness of space seems sometimes overwhelming, but there is an undeniable beauty in that vastness.

Beccy.

[ABDUL WAHAB]

You are absolutely right Beccy. There is beauty in that vastness.

[Chris Shaw]

I have been a star gazer as long as I can remmber. I find the night sky a beautiful place to linger, especially when the reality is otherwise. Your words are relatable Abdul. Thank you fir sharing your poetry.

Chris

[ABDUL WAHAB]

Thank you Chris for your encouraging words.