A Better Tomorrow

A Better Tomorrow

I would want a better tomorrow.

A tomorrow that everyone would want to borrow.

A successful gain,

That was the result of pain.

I won't forget my yesterday,

Because it taught me the value of everyday.

From these I learned,

And success was earned.

Now that I started it,

No one else will end it.

I know it's shallow,

But my dream is a better tomorrow.

Author's Note

It's very short but I hope you like it. :)

Reviews

[Frankie Nguyen]

I really enjoyed reading this (: this was beautifully written (: I just happened to notice you're from the Philippines. My mother is from there (:

[Princess3Morag]

I like it too! Sometimes the jumping from short to long sentences can be a little distracting, but it isn't too distracting and I like what you're saying with the poem.

[Cricket Kidd]

I do like it! And you said you are thirteen? wow, I'm fifteen and have a hard time writing poetry like this. Keep writing!