Balloon

My heart is like a
    Balloon; it can handle the
Wind, but not sharp pins.

My heart is like a
    Balloon; I can let it go,
Watch it fade from sight.

Reviews

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it's cool..well written.............but don't u think that u should have to write on it sth more.........the tittle of ur's poem is totally suite on/with ur's poetry word;s ....so.....i think u should have to continue it......
anyway...i liked ur's few lines even much..........
have a nice day............
may god bless u/.......!