Touch me, feel me

Heart beats, physical

Finally my heart it is beating,
Hot in my skin it is bleeding,
Arrest it, it's speeding
But this feeling? It's fleeting. All I want from you is to touch me,
Feel me.

Author's Note

thoughts please :)

Reviews

[LoneWolf]

this was like an unexpected zepher, it had a swift little cadence to it. I wrote a story called "the Joust" it's also a fast read, you might enjoy ^_^

[GTVile]

Yeah, it was pretty fast! I liked the candor with which its seemingly blurted out in a flurry of passion. You say a lot in a few words. Very good.

[highthought]

not before my eyes fills its hunger from ur sight