Black Moon Rise

A song to my faerie boy. ;-)

He captured me

            Enraptured me

With the mystery of the Fae

Violet eyes so alluring

Ebony hair so demure

            He sings

And he takes hold of all my senses

With his lingering black moon song

Arise, he says

            Arise

My snow white queen

Since the beginning of time

You have belonged to me

So come and bring

            Come and sing

Your ocarina, once your dearest friend

And play along with me.

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

Wow!!! It felt like being inside a dream ripple...(like there's more going on than just the words..hence the ripples) And only in a dream could one be so romantic and dashing of a knight...my fanciful side popped out there for a moment. Very nicely thought out poem..I enjoyed it very much..Thank you for the RR :)

[Illuminare]

Interesting. This poem is quite unique compared to your others. I like the visuals here, they add a nice effect.

I especially liked this part:

"Violet eyes so alluring
Ebony hair so demure
He sings"

Great imagery.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

This feels like a pagan ritual they used to do on March 21st, it was strangely inviting.

And Ash, I would arise at the slightest mystery of spring.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Almost like a painting that sways and leaps in itself, well done, good read.

[Maroon Surreal]

Romantic. Lovely work :)
You got beautiful images there :D

[ravenjess]

This is soooo much fun to read. i love the words, awesome job!

[Thea]

Very nice and well crafted descriptions...Well done...
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the use of fairytale and nice emotion to create a beautiful poem of love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Roe]

So beautiful!!!!