Lost And Found

I don't know where I am; these blank walls
I drop the pen because I can't remember what I wanted to say
I feel so hollow and incomplete
Something's missing in me

You're right there, within my reach
Ready to fill the empty space in my heart
Keep smiling, to remind me of where I belong
Here with you

CHORUS.

I was lost, cold, nothing more
You breathed warmth back into me
Broken, dark, without a soul
You saved me from myself

I didn't know who I was supposed to be
I grew up like an amaranth flower, a deep and everlasting secret
It hurts so much to think
That I won't always have you with me

But now you're right here, your hand in mine
You tell me I'm beautiful and perfect
Keep smiling, so I can keep these memories forever
Locked within me

I'll keep counting the days until I see you again
Keep counting the reasons why we must be apart
All I know is I've come to realize that I need you
No matter what happens between us, I will always be yours
Because you found me
Thank you

Reviews

[Illuminare]

I feel like these lyrics tell a deeply personal and emotional story. Great job expressing that.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire and the description in this chapter. I could feel the confusion and the happiness when being found. Thank you for the excellent chapter.
Coyote

[ravenjess]

awww this is so sweet.

[Wolfwind]

I felt that this piece tied into the previous one. A story of emotions and thought that bring out the images of one who's had to let one go for reasons they found valid, only to realize they loved the other more than they had thought. But the motion of distance has taken place and now the only course is to wait till their love returns.. With the first line of the last stanza, I get the feeling it might relate to one who's either in jail, or in the military.

Over all an outstanding flow of heart, thought and imagery.

Aaron