my funny love for you

my funny love for you

A Poem by A.G Franke
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quote I came up with in like 10min...I look the words but not how they are necessarily arranged, any suggestions?

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'You look at my actions and say I crazy, yet I never claimed to be normal. You say I’m stupid but yet, I never claimed to be smart. You look at my actions and I’m weird, yet, I never claimed to be odd. So the only logical explanation is that I’m oddly in love with to a crazy amount of stupidity."

© 2011 A.G Franke


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this is different. the last line reads a bit awkwardly, but other than that it's an interesting and cute write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting,i enjoyed this! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


A classic turn of phrase, with and humorous to be honest, well done, I feel reading is key to all of us!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I do so enjoy rational insanity!! It's where I live.

You might want to check your last line...you're either missing a word or have one word too many. If you're addressing a sig other, perhaps "you" is missing between "with" and "to"...if you're addressing the universal "you", then perhaps lose the "to". Just trying to make some contextual sense of it....

Posted 13 Years Ago


In a world where most of us walk on a thin line of sanity and insanity. We need to be a bit crazy sometime to balance out the bad things in a life. I like the logic of this quote.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cute write..I like it..x

Posted 13 Years Ago



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