my funny love for you

quote I came up with in like 10min...I look the words but not how they are necessarily arranged, any suggestions?

'You look at my actions and say I crazy, yet I never claimed to be normal. You say I’m stupid but yet, I never claimed to be smart. You look at my actions and I’m weird, yet, I never claimed to be odd. So the only logical explanation is that I’m oddly in love with to a crazy amount of stupidity."

Reviews

[Talkativeted]

This made me laugh. I think the way it is written is a good way of expressing the thought as it feels like it is written from the mind and not had to much interference. I would perhaps remove the word 'to' from the last sentence so that it pops!
Well done.

love how you started this out. No one is stupid. well done write!

[Lover109]

i like this, its cute(:

[Darkbynight]

This could definetly go further...this kind of reminds me of rain (the gentle kind, not the hard, little kind that hurts when it hits you :D) it's gentle, yet it changes everything....'ya know? But I like the point...and I definetly think that you could make a poem out of this! Bravissimo!
I like the first line "You look at my actions, and say that I'm crazy, but I never claimed to be normal" the very best :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

You look at my actions and say that I am crazy, yet I never claimed to be normal, now did I? You say I am stupid but yet, I never claimed to be smart. You look at my actions and say I am weird, yet I never claimed to be normal. So the only logical explanation is that I am oddly in love with a crazy amount of stupidity.....best I could do interpreting.........very nice A.G. :)

[qaralynn]

like it! made me smile :)

[Sukriti Suki]

You look at my actions
say I am crazy
yet I never claimed to be normal

You look at my actions
say I am stupid
yet I never claimed to be smart

You look at my actions
say I am weird
yet I never claimed to be odd

The only logical explanation is
I am stupidly, weirdly in love to a crazy amount.

Just how I would do it. I really like the idea.

[Pollyanna]

You look at my actions and say I'm crazy . . . I never claimed to be sane.
You look at my actions and say I'm stupid . . . I never claimed to be smart.
You look at my actions and say I'm weird . . . I never claimed to be normal.
Look at my actions . . . the only logical explanation is I'm weirdly, stupidly, crazily in love.


That would be my suggestion, but I still like what you have done with this piece! Fabulous job!

[penNhand]

Seems that people see us in a day different light than we see ourselves. Lovely thing about you writing, is that it supports the I'm different and I don't give a damn era. Nice work.