"Walk Out"

Somthing I am very passionate about. "Taken responsiblty for your actions" Also being "pro-life"

You say you would always love her even if you had an unplanned kid.

But you knocked her up, ran away and hid.

Now her and I both mad as hornet, our image of you has slid!

While your is out wasting money on a drug deals,

She struggling to give their kid his next meal.

She struggling to not drop out of school.

For she choose to women-up and choose the pro-life rule

She struggles to take care of the baby.

Plus working all the time, struggling just to get by.

She lies alone at when she and the baby both cries,

Beating herself up.

Thinking to herself how she believed your lies.

She looks up and yells at the sky.

But she is determine to help her baby until she dies!

She cleans, works, studies and cooks

Have you ever thought about how you hurt her when her virginity he took.

Her self-esteem you shook.

But still no child support, the judge should hit him with the book.

Your so worthless, a waste of space, waste of air, not even worth to be spit upon.

You are the lowest of low, you’re the worst of the worst, on the ground like a snake,

Maybe on judgment day you will finally awake.

But to society, it is just anther walk-out.

Reviews

[northern monkey]

Powerful sentiments powerfully expressed. Good job A.G.

[Hayley]

I can really feel your emotion here, most of which I agree with totally. Only grammar problems here are "Now her and I both mad as hornet" should She and I both mad as hornets, and "Your so worthless" should be You're so worthless.
Other than that, it is very powerful and well constructed

[qaralynn]

beautiful and sad write

[Pollyanna]

Sadly, this has become the norm; wonderful job! Always proof; clean up the pronoun usage and this will become even more powerful.

[LA Lorena]

sadly, this happens far too often. you've expressed some powerful and strong convictions here, that makes for good writing and for good characters too.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a powerful write

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This is really good! i totally agree with the meaning behind it. (: