mess around

just a mess around rap. stuff to build me up when I'm feeling down.

Look at me, I'm an up coming I  icon.

Flashs all over when they flash der Nikon's

When you hear my name when the ladies start to conversate.

Your seem my power when the compittions I abliterated.

On and on it's them I annilate.

For I just all these MC's I just out spitted, all these MC's I just outwitted.

Don't mess with me for I'm Michel Vicking dis stuff DAWG.

Better get a Doctor I'm on dis rhymes like so sick.

On this da mic and I just slicklty slick it.

All the fans want to know how I can just wick it.

MC's come to me for me for advice like I'm Jimmy Cricket

They all know I'm one bad mo-fo

As I diss and diss on MC's ego.

Everyone know's I'm one ballin ballar

When you see in da hood you better say hallar! ;)

Author's Note

ignore grammar and spelling for I'm doing this rough draft style. made this up in like 10 min so. What ya'll think?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the flow and the story in the words. It was fun to read. You went in many directions. I like it all. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Pollyanna]

Good rhythm!

[Sukriti Suki]

I can't review much of rap as I don't have much experience there, but it sounds good.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I think it has a great rhythm and much potential :)