What's one more time?

This goes out to a brown-eyed beauty I feel for not to long ago. Unfortunately she had a boyfriend. But we are not good friends! =)

What's one more time?

What's one more poem? One more rhyme?

If you steal my heart is it a crime?

What is it if I lay awake one more time at night?

What is it one more time a broken heart to fight.

After all what's one more time to be down and blue?

So what's telling myself one more lie.

What's one more tear to cry.

So what's my own heart to deny.

I don't know but I must thank you for when you broke my heart,

for at least you gave me back a part.

Even thought on the inside I'm bleeding,

Your kindness is all the more succeeding.

Even thought inside my stomach is sick and queasy.

I must thank you for letting me down easy.

But still you make me smile up a whirl.

Thank you for your kindness, brown-eyed girl

Reviews

[northern monkey]

Welcome to the club friend. Devil's Angel is right, these rhymes are forced, but appreciated your feelings here, and keep writing, practice improves us all, and we're ALL learning from each other. Roll on your next piece...........

[Sukriti Suki]

Sweet but I found some of the rhyming a bit forced.