So Fly

Just a mess around poem (I do not thing I'm a Gangster) =)

I'm so fly, I make Lybia an all-fly zone.

Don't mess with me I'm bad to the bone.

On the mic I got rhymes that are sick.

On dis stuff like wickely quick.

Forget being fly like a G-6

I got an bangin remix

All the MC's I cause pain.

The try to battle but it's only in vain.

Dey be like who's this White boy he's rapping is insane.

Ya check up my vocabulary, for it's is rather scary.

Now every one from the 313,

Wave you hands up in the air with me.

You know I love all you fans, and you know I mean it no homo.

If I'm going to fast I can take it slo mo.

Got more rhymes then Edgar Allen Poe

For you know me, I'm fresher than a icebreaker mint.

Though all this rhymes I sprint.

I got skillz that killz.

I'm authentically made and authentic inspired.

Hard cored and hard core wired!  ;)

 

 

 

Reviews

[.shalynn.009.]

This is really hard to review, mainly because it's like reading the lyrics to a song. Without the rhythm and beat, it loses something, because songs and raps are meant to be listened to, not read. They play with the way words sound more than the way theu are read or the way they look. Plus, i just know nothing about what makes a rap good. But this was fun to read and full of defiance. The reference to the white boy, who I'm guessing is you, made me think of an old school Slim Shady rap. I'd be interested to hear it. Good write and thanks for the RR.

[Sukriti Suki]

A nice change to read!! Would be nice if rapped well with some drum'n'bass tunes!!

[Ashley]

hehe. this poem made me realize how white i really am. it's cute though.