"What would you do if tommorow was too late?"

sad love poem.

What would you do if tomorrow was too late?

You couldn't leave it up to fate.

Tell me dear what would you do.

Baby tel me it it's true.

Would you love me, the way I love you.

Would you get rid of all my doubt and all my sorrow.

If you didn't have a chance tomorrow.

If today was your last day, what would you say?

When you look outside your window to see the last rise or the sun.

When you hear me screaming "I love you" as I have been since day one.

Reviews

[northern monkey]

Like this. Great feelings again,and better rhythm. Nice job my friend. Keep writing.

[Jvl narasimharao]

you seem to be a promising poet.You will mature by and by.
yoursJVL

[Sukriti Suki]

a good concise poem but lacks a bit of depth...

[Pollyanna]

Very raw, but with considerable feeling.

[A.G Franke]

Thank you, yes unfortunatly that is how people are. Especially these days everyone is afraid of showing too much love, of it being takin the wrong way. I'v lost a vey good friend in a car accident. So I have learned to always say "I love you"

[Coyote Poetry]

The last whisper in death are words of love and desire to make peace. It is sad some people wait till their death bed to make amends. Better to try to find peace with friends and family before it is too late. I like the complete poem. Words are needed to keep a balance life. A strong ending to a very good poem.
Coyote