How do I feel now.

sad love poem

Sometimes I am amazed at how much you can mess with my emotions.

With every touch and motion.

Sometimes you make me calm, other times mad.

At times happy, but other times sad

But it only last for a while.

For soon comes out my smile.

You can make me humble or make he bold.

At times you can make me hot, other times cold.

All depending on the emotions you want to mold.

You pick if I have joy or sorrow.

You pick my emotions of today and tomorrow.

You can make me hate or love, to have agony or to care.

You are the reason for all the emotions that I bear.

You can even give me courage or give me a scare.

You can give me depression or aggression.

You can make me feel innocent or give a confession.

For it is my heart that you have managed to steal.

But sense you've left, I honestly don't know how to feel.

Reviews

[cfix]

This is amazing, so full of powerful emotion.
Wonderful rhyme scheme as well.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is such a good poem, wish my poems were like this :')

[Sukriti Suki]

I enjoyed this one, though at places the rhyming does seem a bit forced...

[A.G Franke]

Thank you for all your commets. I'm new on this website and don't really know how it all work. Hence, I apprciate all input and advice! =)

[Pollyanna]

The sentiment is beautiful, but the rhyming seems forced and unnatural. This is only my opinion (take it with a grain of salt) and others may disagree (I can almost bet money most will).

I look forward to reading more from you!

[Little Abbey]

Wow, a lot of emotion placed into that poem, and the words flowed so nicely together. Awesome job!!!