The Random

The Random

A Poem by A.E Blink
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Have fun!

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When I woke up at 3 a.m, I had some Pixie Stix.

I found a lolly-pop under my bed, I only had a few licks.

Put on some yellow socks, matched them with pink flip-flops.

I dressed myself in a shirt much too big.

Pulled on a hat shaped like a pig.

Ran around in the shape of a square, the neighbor kids I surely did scare.

Picked some grass and threw it in the air.

Stepped on my homework and made it tear.

This is who I am.

Chicken, turkey, potatoes, ham.

 

© 2009 A.E Blink


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Made me laugh, was indeed random.
But honestly, some parts were predictable - I think you can do better, you should go over it again and change some stuff, if only for the sake of cementing the randomness.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Verrry Random and equally entertaining! I loved the feeling of unconcernedness in it. *thumbs up* for making me smile!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was funny, good job

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

random indeed. i like it. its very funny.
thanks for the review also!!!
~dixie~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ben
Wow, umm.. This was entertaining. I don't know if you meant to use the word 'surly' or not, but you might want to check it. Great job, I liked it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a fun little piece. Generally likeable, reassuringly oddball. Sometimes my life is like this, but we all have our little personal chaos to embrace, don't we? :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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A
This brought a smile to my face...this poem is adorable! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


haha. i like this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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