Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill

A Poem by A.E. Reed
"

A twist on Jack and Jill's story.

"

That old story of Jack and Jill

In which they had gone up that hill

And on the way down

Jack had fallen and broken his crown

Jill just filled with laughter

At poor Jack’s disaster

It was all her doing

The idea for Jack’s death had been brewing

Then she had taken action

With the proper distraction

She stuck out one of her feet

Everything was complete

Jack fell headfirst

That was probably the worst

And Jill knew she won

Her evil deed had been done

Some ask why

Did you really want him to die?

But she was never seen after

All that’s left is the echo of her laughter

© 2011 A.E. Reed


Author's Note

A.E. Reed
A little something for someone that needed a little happiness. To bad it'll be a while before she reads it, but I know she was looking forward to it. XD

-Alexis

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

this is so epic!^^

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is so freaking amazing its so funny amazing job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh my god that is so crepy but friggin hilarious!!!!i love it! Yay for Jill

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is definitely a twist! haha. I really love this idea! Twists to cliches are at the heart of poetry. You have done a very nice job with this as well. It is funny, but almost dark. haha. I enjoyed the read a lot. Thanks for sharing! All the best.
J

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thanks i did like it, it did make me smile :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

928 Views
15 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 23, 2010
Last Updated on October 5, 2011

Author

A.E. Reed
A.E. Reed

FL



About
So, I won't go crazy with this because I know most people won't read it unless they're your stalker or something. I'm pretty much just a typical girl. I like to have fun and hang out with my friends (.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..