Jack and Jill

A twist on Jack and Jill's story.

That old story of Jack and Jill

In which they had gone up that hill

And on the way down

Jack had fallen and broken his crown

Jill just filled with laughter

At poor Jack’s disaster

It was all her doing

The idea for Jack’s death had been brewing

Then she had taken action

With the proper distraction

She stuck out one of her feet

Everything was complete

Jack fell headfirst

That was probably the worst

And Jill knew she won

Her evil deed had been done

Some ask why

Did you really want him to die?

But she was never seen after

All that’s left is the echo of her laughter

Author's Note

A little something for someone that needed a little happiness. To bad it'll be a while before she reads it, but I know she was looking forward to it. XD

-Alexis

Reviews

[CompellingComposer]

Strangely humorous and eerily creepy at the same time... I love it! Awesome job!

[Jesse Jacques]

a little creepy sounding but it was really good. nice job with coming up with a different story than the original

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

BWAHHAHHAHHAHHAHAHHA!~ found myself a new writer to subscribe to!!!~ love your dismembered unNurseryRhyme~ LOL!!!

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LOL..a twisted nursey rhyme! great write

[TBird J.]

Haha I enjoyed this, so dark and twisted! Nice new take on it.

[Revenge<3'sMe]

EVIL. Little. girl. But I loved it! It amazes me how you can always put a twist on things!

[MajorJesusFreak]

Wow enjoyable and yet odd but enjoyable. Good job.

[Short.Nerd]

Go Jill!!! Haha... Nice job on this! Its so... AWESOME! (:

[Grace Catherine C.]

Haha, very amusing, nicely done

[lynne]

Thisis somewhat depressing...But good :P