What you did.

What you did.

A Poem by A.E. Reed
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I wish it worked out but it was what you did.

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I guess you never did care

You know that it isn’t fair

But you went and did it anyway

So I think of it every day

The pain I went through

The things I wish you didn’t do

I guess it wasn’t meant to be

You weren’t right for me

You lied

And I cried

But it has made me stronger

To know I live in pain no longer

Sometimes I wish it worked out

That I gave you the benefit of the doubt

But then I would have been wronging myself

And destroying my mental health

So I lost what I had

But in a way I’m glad

Because I’m getting better

Now that we aren’t together

 

© 2011 A.E. Reed


Author's Note

A.E. Reed
This can relate to many things. For some it would be a person they liked but for me it was a friend (well, friends) that I had that didn't treat me well but I wish they did. I tend to have lots of friendship troubles.

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I like it's universal tone. Since everyone can look at the piece and relate to it in there own way, it makes for a meaningful read. Very well put together.

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love love love the flow!!! You did a wonderful job! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have lost so many friends some I miss and some I don't. It isn't easy but for the most it is for the best. Very good writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow this is really good. i love the way it flows, i can relate to it. at least you can are getting better from not being together without the other person. i on the other hand is having a hard time. eh


Posted 14 Years Ago



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