Touchin' the Stars;

You make me complete

You make me so,

so completely miserable

got me feelin' so vulnerable

Twiddlin' my fingers

So uncomfortable

Losin' track of time

in your eyes

babe, gimme a sign

tell me your hurtful words

were a bunch of lies

I've never felt so close

to the bottom

Sinking in a puddle of tears

but these fears, i fought 'em

so strong, i'm standing

but i'm feeling stranded

our love you've forgotten

something feels strange

maybe you've changed

and deeper are these scars

yet, i'm walkin' on clouds

i'm touching the stars

so, what are the odds

we'd ever love again?

we're building these facades

still, happiness we condemn

I've never felt so close

to the bottom

Sinking in a puddle of tears

but these fears, i fought 'em

so strong, i'm standing

but i'm feeling stranded

our love you've forgotten

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not bad, quite heart-wrenching honestly.

[Boldpen]

Beautiful and truly heart touching. It was a very emotional write and lines were decorated with writer's feelings so deeply... that reader just want to console the creator of this piece.
Simply amazing... great job.

[Hoosier Belle]

highly emotional, like and enjoyed every line. awesome!

[Amy Bumpas]

Love...emotional, personal, raw, deep, feel as one, lose the one...
all summed up in this...great read, you are indeed a talent:)).
Keep up the good work...

[Ruth]

I felt every line of this!
A wonderful portrayal of such an emotional time, beautifully delivered love xoxo