Peter Pan

Nothing lasts,

at least not on the outside

hunny, we won't be young forever

but let's drink to today

and baby, we can pretend

all night long

Let's run away

into the distant sky

'til the beat is forever playing

in our tortured minds

we'll be peter pan

flying

so

high

hey, i don't think I caught your name

Maybe, it just slipped my mind

'cause everythings doing that lately

My minds an empty hole

waiting to be filled

let's fill it

fill it

with a memory

...of what ?

....

Let's run away

into the distant sky

'til the beat is forever playing

in our tortured minds

we'll be peter pan

flying

so so

high

tonight won't last forever

let's make us last forever

'cept to you,

forever is only til tomorrow

Let's run away

into the distant sky

'til the beat is forever playing

in our tortured minds

we'll be peter pan

flying

so

high

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The lyrical tone of this and the way it dances in your head as a reader...I believe this can be worked out to get more impact in the lines...