Children Of Misery

Falling headfirst

into misery

but don't hesitate

i'm the only one you cursed

 

leave it all on a gray ending

i can't make anything

out of might-have-beens

this will take some mending

 

i know we are young

but this beautiful world

is turning mighty ugly

what will become of us

after this deadly fall

and hunny, I'm not a liar

but i thought this was trust

 

I don't know what i've done

we used to have this figured out

now it's in question

what happened to the love we sung

 

i never got it right

thats how this breaks down

and i'm always looking down

to a too familiar sight

 

does love make sense at all?

well come with your

arms raised high

as your heart sighs small

 

you think your better alone

but you will never be

we are children of misery

so many hearts left unsewn

 

you can't save us

its our time to break down

and now we must

 

i know we are young

but this beautiful world

is turning mighty ugly

what will become of us

after the fall

hunny i'm not a liar

but i believed this was love

Reviews

[Sher{alynn} Veron{ica}]

Sure was love! Beautifully noted.

[Aurora Lynn]

Great poem! The only thing I would suggest would be to capitalize you i's. Other than that, great job!

[compositionc]

Fantastic.

[joshua deathdealer]

Excellent write. 'leave it all on a gray ending' I love it.

[StarSandwich]

O_o Loved this one too.. You are good at this, I can imagen whats going on here 'I know we are young but this beautiful world is turning mighty ugly' loved that bit. =D

[Helpless]

the ending is amazingly heartbreaking....

[Kenneth The Poet]

Yeah speed metal with a bit of screamo. Not bad, your work is evocative.

[Rene Velez]

love can have so many ups and downs it's like riding a roller coaster...the flow is awesome...more enlightening than telling, filled with feelings..nice poem A.