Excited

Excited

A Poem by Austin
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Random bursts of extreme happiness make words, and words make poems, and this poem makes a smile. :)

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I'm so excited about the little things.

I can laugh at nothing in a game of monopoly

Or scream random things at people I dont know.

 

 

I'm so excited about the happy things.

Friends all around me, making me laugh.

Music that literally forces me to dance.

 

 

I'm so excited about the peaceful things.

Sitting alone in a field with nothing but nature as company.

Rivers that flow and flowers that grow.

 

 

I'm so excited about love

...about imagination

                 ...about everything

...about nothing

          ...about life.

 

© 2009 Austin


Author's Note

Austin
get excited about something.

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I definitely like the start of this. The end was good. But the beginning I felt like a pingpong ball going back and forth from THIS to THAT - which contradicted each other. And it was simple to follow, good diction, the point got across to me (which is a success in itself) and I like the light hearted optimism!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I definitely like the start of this. The end was good. But the beginning I felt like a pingpong ball going back and forth from THIS to THAT - which contradicted each other. And it was simple to follow, good diction, the point got across to me (which is a success in itself) and I like the light hearted optimism!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) I'm excited about multiple things, and this is definately an amazing asset to that excitement. :)
Woot!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 8, 2009

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Austin
Austin

Robertsdale, AL



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