Daily Hatred

 Day after day I come home

To see you sitting there

On your stupid chair

A blank look on your face

The smell of alcohol in the air

Day by day I hate you more

But you simply don't care

So looking at the bottle in your hand with distaste

I pour it and a bit of my soul down the drain

Reviews

[sara]

written really well!! the repition of "day by day" was brilliant!

[Daniel]

Emotion. STRONG emotion!
Nicely written, also. =D