Touch Me

Touch me

Touch me,
it doesn't matter where
and it doesnt matter how
I need to know I'm still alive
so someone touch me now
Shake my hand and say hello
or pat me on the back
kiss me on the cheek
that I may feel this sense I lack
slap my face and pull my hair
make me bleed I just don't care
dig your nails into my skin
so I can feed this need within
I've been numb for such a time
that even pain would be sublime
so touch me, touch me now
I don't care where, I don't care how

Reviews

[The Pursuit of Venus]

This is amazing, and I can relate to this. Good write x

[Yellow Butterfly]

A hug, a cuddle, a tap on the arm what can seem like a simple gestures can mean the world to someone on the receiving end of a touch.

Your playful words touched me..... :o)

[Holly Mason]

like this much thanks

[Andrew Hawkins]

Thank you Holly

[not here]

Hi Andrew.
Your poem has good sense of rhythm. And where you're light on imagery you make up with strong feeling.
Thanks for sharing.

[Andrew Hawkins]

Thank you Lakely

[fiery-san]

Beautiful.

So simple yet it conveys enough emotions to make me a bit teary-eyed.

It strikes a nerve to be honest... there are time when you just shut down and want to feel something but you can't. You're just blank.

Anyways. Awesome job. ^_^

[Andrew Hawkins]

Thank you fiery-san

[Pi Cee]

Fantastic write.

[Andrew Hawkins]

Thank you Pi

[Heather]

ahh yes i know this feeling... well penned

[Andrew Hawkins]

Thanks Heather

[zainul]

It is a great invitation.
I hope someone is around to respond soon.
Wonderful write with lovely rhymes.

[Andrew Hawkins]

Thank you Zainul