One Last Thing.

I feel like just writing this and forgetting about you forever.

What did the words "Forever and Always" mean to you?

When I said I'd do anything before I'd lose you?

When your lips locked with mine,and i felt my aneixty go away

The pain of the world dissapper.

When your eyes looked at me i felt warm and tingly.

Now you look at me like the Monster you told me I wasnt.

I remember when your fingers traced my scars

Now all you wanna do is reopen and leave them there to bleed.

As much as I hate you.

Seeing you hurts me.

It takes me back to all the things that we once were.

As much as you say you hate me.

One last thing.

I Love You Forever And Always.

Author's Note

true story brah

Reviews

Awwww......
This is a good write. So sad, but -sniffle- I like it.
This poem and heartfelt and I like the part:
"When your eyes looked at me I felt warm and tingly
Now you look at me like the Monster you told me I wasn't.
I remember when your fingers traced my scars
Now all you want to do is reopen and leave them there to bleed."

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow this is freakin amazing i loove your word choice and the nature of your writing style :) good job! mind checking out some of my stuff? thanks

[Nicole Cruz]

I like it, mostly because i can relate to it. Well written/

[Arianna]

this is my life. like seriously, you just described it to a T. wich ive been trying to do for i dont know...4 months now.
anyway it was brilliant. :) but im really sorry that its a reality for you too. just know your not alone. youll probobly not stop loving her. never completly really. but it does get easier, im learning that one day at a time. :) this was a wonderful piece. :)

[Anonymous Me]

things aren't going to well for romeo, huh? i'm sorry. But i mean, at least your not dead. And it's a good poem. I like it...a lot, actually

I think this is sort of ironic. Usually boys are the ones falsely saying "forever and always," and the girls are the ones with the broken hearts. In the very description of how you felt about this girl, it is made very clear how almost innocent and sweet your relationship with her was. But you certainly have a way with words.

Also, you will eventually stop loving her. From what I've seen here, I know how you feel. You hate to love her and she loves to hate you. But it will end. And that's okay, don't feel guilty. It's good to move on, especially when you're so young. You don't want to lose your life to a girl you met in high school.

[paradise]

Very deep poem for me. Considering I find that many boys say to thier girlfriends Forever and Always. But they never really mean it, I really enjoyed your poem. Very nice but sad. THe strength of the poem is nice, well done

[AchingAlexandra]

This one kinda hurt for me to read because it's reminding me about the guy I'm sorta seeing right now and how he feels about his ex . . .
Very well written though , and the meaning is clear . I enjoyed the read (: