Alone

Back when i was almost really a dead man i fel like this..

I'm Alone in the worl. all my friends that i nhad are gone or turned against me. what i found funny and what they found funny differs greatly. They're all gone. No girlfriend to comfort me. i'm alone. its as if I'm invisible  everyone walks past me the friends that i had at one time taunt and haress me in the halls.

 

even the people i thought that once liked me s a friend,the ones that promised to never leave my ide,now walk away leaving me alone to die. Sometimes I ponder why i dont end it all and lapse into the sweet silence that we know as death. i'm lingering at thoughts of doing it. after all i'm alone,who would miss me?

 

Maybe it would please the ones that hate me.To see me gone,that would please them. To go on with their day knowing I wasn't there to bother them,cause problems. The news of being gone would thrill them greatly. what about the ones who cherish my company? The ones that stood by me all this time? Sorry to dissappoint,but there are none.

I've listed my tale its enough-A Dead Man

If i was gone would YOU miss me?

Author's Note

ignore grammer problems and typos,what do you think?

Reviews

[Destyni Pitney]

I really liked this. People who are meant to stay in you life are always there and the ones that are gone always leave behind their footprints.

[Nicole Cruz]

Loved it! iknow how you feel

[Anonymous Me]

So now i do know you. a little bit. so yes. i would miss you :)

[Jyango Ryudo]

so beautiful! it really lets u see into your seoul ya no keep up the teh brilliance :)

Until you love yourself, nobody else can.

[Anonymous Me]

It's great. The feeling is real. I home not Really Real. Don't die. Please. But i strongly believe that a story that you can feel is the best. And the fact that you're writing means a lot...I don't know you at all, so maybe not. But you don't really wanna die. Writing is a way to make your mark on the world. Don't let everything go before your ripple can become a wave. Who knows what you could do? i know i sound like some sort of rehab facility commercial, but really. Don't give anyone that much power over you. From what i've read, they certainly don't deserve it, Sweets.

[paradise]

I really like this story. I really hope this isnt one of those in life senarios. I would hate to think that someone would have to live with no one to comfort them. Everyone should be loved and accepted no matter what. If this is a true story I will answer your question. Even though I barely know you, I would you miss you. A person commits suicide every 40 seconds please dont be ne of these people. Your life is short dont make it any shorter,

[gothicchica]

brilliant