My Best Guy Friend

I wrote this after I lived it

I see him staring

His eyes at my arm

I forgot to wear a sweater

To school and

Now i'm screwed

He saw my scars

From now and in the past

Later, When school ended

He talked to me and

Asked me why

But I just looked at him and

Started to cry

He walked to me

Gave me a hug and

Said It was gonna be fine

We sat down

On the school bench And

For the first time

I started to open up

About my life and

He just sat there and listened

That day he became my Best Guy Friend

And I can talk to him about anything!

Author's Note

I love this poem because I love'd that day, I reliezed I had someone to talk to... If there's grammer issues ignore them...

Reviews

[Time.]

This really reminded me of a time in my life before my friend carla passed away, you put some depth of meaning in a poem for a lot of people I really enjoyed this a lot.

[ivizarx]

very straightforward to the point and sweet... I like it, and thnk you for recommending it to me :)

[Ashli The Amazing]

that's so nice [: great write

[Maya Storm]

that's so sweet, I liked the sentiments of the piece. I really liked the idea of it. Good one Sam.

[Decdreams87]

I love realizing things like that and everything feels so much brighter. bc once in a while, we all forget. awesome!

[light and ashes]

I think this is awesome. It is great to have someone to listen and talk to you when you really need it.

[J.]

I've noticed a pattern in your writing. It seems you are going through a really rough patch. The imagery is great, the kind of description I just want you to display as much as possible. And should not be capitalized unless its at the beginning of the line. Also, "and" is a really weak word to end a line on. Try having stronger line endings. "Bench" is a strong ending because it sounds strong.

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this (: it's amazing, and the imagery is great to, it warmed my heart reading this. And it made me realize how much I miss Raven

[~Paedams]

That's beautiful! I am glad you have someone to talk to Sam. I love the flow of this poem!

[Canicus]

I love this. everyone needs someone like that in there life. good write.