Just a dream...

I wrote this when I was tired and I started day dreaming...

I lay in bed

Hearing the yelling

Getting mad

At whats being said.

I picture the knife

In my hands

Inching toward my skin

Ready to cut.

I press the knife

Onto my wrist

And move slowly

Making sure I feel the pain.

I see the blood

And I smile

Knowing I let

All my anger out.

But then suddenly

My alarm goes off

I wake up

And my knifes gone

Arms not bleeding

And again im angry

I DONT FEEL PAIN!

Author's Note

Looking for reviews on what you thought... ignore the spelling/grammer

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

The theme of this is at best like a haunted dream that peels away layers of my sanity. It bleeds emotion from gasping wounds that might never heal. In conclusion it reflected a realm I can closely attend.

[.......]

has a wonderful rhyme scheme & flow

[Daytonight]

Very dark but very well written. I think we all face that pain sometimes and search for something...anything to take it away. Keep on penning.

[Eile MacIntyre]

It has a good flow. :)

[stars are far]

love this so much !
really great job :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Strong write. Its good.

[rwar ish me]

Sark and emotional, I can relate though, good write!

[karmax]

Nice penning of your thoughts, Dark and emotional a cry to be heard. Anger is the ink in your pen...let it flow, and smile that it's out! Nicely penned...this made me feel!

[Silvario]

very nicely written i like the flow and pace of this piece. the dark tone pulls at the readers emotions and i found myself feeling for the subject.
very nicely done indeed :)

i look forward to more :)

[DarkShines]

I think this is very well done! good work, certainly going to look over more of your work now.