Raceing the wind...

I wrote this when I was bored in school muahaha

I picture myself

Just running through a field

Know one can stop me

Know one can bring me down.

 

I ran past little houses

Through really tall weeds

I just cant stop

Theres a feeling inside of me.

 

Theres a feeling inside of me

That i'm trying to let go of

I feel like im racing the wind

And nothing will stop me.

 

I'm invincible

When i'm in my own little world

Nothing can bring me down

Nothing can knock me out

 

I'm there to runaway

From all the stress

From all the rumors

And from all the sins.

 

So if you happen to see me

Off in outer space

Please let me be for

I am raceing the wind...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ame Rain]

this poem so beautiful ,, i swear i love it nor just like it ,,

this is so great ..

[light and ashes]

Fantastic poem!!! I love it! The concluding stanza ties it all together perfectly "So if you happen to see me off in outer space Please let me be for I am raceing in the wind."

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is a great poem. I am in love with the concept.

[mi-chan]

really love it the theme and everything! The flow and rhythm to it's just right ^^ nice job!

[Kathryn]

Love it. this poem is really uplifting, well done :)

[Coyote Poetry]

It is good to run with the wind. Freedom is necessary in a life. I like the feel and the emotion in the poem.
"I'm there to runaway
From all the stress
From all the rumors
And from all the sins."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[TJ]

Very good! The imagery is wonderful and the escapism is something almost all writers can relate to. Also had a very good form and flow.
Good work.

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome!! I love the imagery and the feeling of invincibility in this write!! Keep it up.

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this :D
and I can relate..
"I ran past little houses
Through really tall weeds
I just cant stop
Theres a feeling inside of me."
This is my favorite stanza ^_^
Amazing Sam (: