Raceing the wind...

I wrote this when I was bored in school muahaha

I picture myself

Just running through a field

Know one can stop me

Know one can bring me down.

 

I ran past little houses

Through really tall weeds

I just cant stop

Theres a feeling inside of me.

 

Theres a feeling inside of me

That i'm trying to let go of

I feel like im racing the wind

And nothing will stop me.

 

I'm invincible

When i'm in my own little world

Nothing can bring me down

Nothing can knock me out

 

I'm there to runaway

From all the stress

From all the rumors

And from all the sins.

 

So if you happen to see me

Off in outer space

Please let me be for

I am raceing the wind...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

"So if you happen to see me
Off in outer space
Please let me be for
I am raceing the wind..."
Very nice way to wrap up this piece; the repeated lines there's a feeling inside of me works so well. Run like the wind. Sorry it took so long to get to the read request, but I am just now back up and running like the wind. Muahahaha

[MAC]

love this write...it is something that your readers can related to because of your sincerity in this piece.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I can so relate to this! I can just imagine myself sprinting through a field with my arms out. I love it! First stanza, you say "know" a couple times and I think you mean "no."

[Amanda Naomi]

i like it!! i have that feeling when i'm driving sometimes...that i just want to keep going.....don't get of the freeway at your exit, just keep going to an unknown future!!! it will be better that way really, and then the other voice come, that stupid rational one that say i can't....

i hate rational...i want to keep going like you do in the poem!!!

[DarkShines]

Great imagery on this poem! I really enjoye this, well done once again!

[Kayla K]

I can relate to this a lot. Great write.

[Eile MacIntyre]

Last verse = super stellar

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I think this is a very brillant piece. I love what your saying here and oh boy can I relate. Great write!!! : )

[brenda]

this is absoulutely great i love this me too sometimes i want to run away feel free and you described it so well here this is really great !

[Time.]

I loved this poem.. the concept was amazing.. :D